syble4 ([identity profile] syble4.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kyizi 2009-05-07 03:14 am (UTC)

If I can stop crying long enough, I'll tell you how wonderful this is. You had me in tears for the whole last part.

I've wanted you to write how John gets changed back into Sheppard forever, but now I feel like Rodney at the end, and I'm really sad - and happy - that it finally happened.

Of course, now I can not wait until your muse has you writing the next bit from John's pov. I love that you left him with all his memories intact.

Oh and you made me love Lorne even more with his understanding and friendship with Rodney.

Thank you!!

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