Okay, words cannot express how utterly nervous I was waiting for your reaction, because wee!John has been your flailing point for as long as it's been mine. I don't think I'd've written anything past the original five things if it hadn't been for you, so yeah, so nervous! I should be asleep right now, but I had to wait for you to finish!

The end? When I spoke to you on the phone, I actually had it finishing at the end of the scene in Sheppard's room, but it just felt like I wasn't done, so I added the next two scenes. I'm glad that you understand why I really couldn't deal with more of the aftermath from Rodney's PoV, because it needs to be John. I need to deal with Elizabeth's story and possibly a bit more of Lorne's (maybe even Cadman's), but really I need Sheppard to be the one to round the whole thing off.

I'll reply to the rest tomorrow, I just wanted to say rtfn *smooooooch* and thanks for the feedback, sweetie!