I'll try :) I think it was just the shock of realising that, yeah, holy crap, the similarities can't really be missed.
Although now I'm pretty sure I'm right about who Lita's brother's supposed to be...
Yeah, I didn't think it would fool you! I think I might be okay to change it, though. I think if I swap one of the 'mystery guys' with her brother, then it works just the same. That way I have the same characters but a different set up. I actually toyed with that idea before I posted it, but decided I liked it the way it was. It doesn't really make that much of a difference to the fic if I do.
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I'll try :) I think it was just the shock of realising that, yeah, holy crap, the similarities can't really be missed.
Although now I'm pretty sure I'm right about who Lita's brother's supposed to be...
Yeah, I didn't think it would fool you! I think I might be okay to change it, though. I think if I swap one of the 'mystery guys' with her brother, then it works just the same. That way I have the same characters but a different set up. I actually toyed with that idea before I posted it, but decided I liked it the way it was. It doesn't really make that much of a difference to the fic if I do.