Well, I absolutely loved it! I'm becoming quite a Lorne shipper (and I don't seem to be picky with whom he is paired--they all seem to work so well). I think you've struck a nerve with me and I'm looking at the character in different ways. I know just the other day some friends were discussing who Teyla was leaving her baby with, and without a thought I knew it would be Lorne ;-)

I did notice a couple of typos in the text you may want to fix. One you had "her" instead of "he" in the sentence "And Cassie's as much his as if her were her real father". Another was "cabable", and near the end of the story they get "read" for bed instead of "ready".

I'm so glad you are giving us more glimpses of the wee!John fic, because even if he isn't the center of the story he is still the focal point. Thanks ;-)